First Interior-Bedroom

[NgoJennifer]

Hello! I have been working on this set for quite awhile now. I would love any feed back that will help me improve. What should I fix? How should I fix it? Thanks for viewing!

 

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/pooka88/DaySceneD.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/pooka88/NightSceneA.jpg

[SandmanNinja]

Hi and Welcome.

 

I'd say it looks a bit dark. Maybe increase your bounces by 1 or 2, or add another light from outside of the room that can add some illumination.

 

Nice modeling! Keep posting.

[NgoJennifer]

Thanks Joel! I brightened up the room a bit. Let me know what you think!

 

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/pooka88/DaySceneE.jpg

[demo38]

It's looking nice. Not suggesting to change it, but the angle feels a bit strange being so low, maybe adding something of interest in the foreground could add some reason for being down there. Might want to add some bump to the floor. The canopy on the bed seems light compared to the large massing on the bed posts... I like the look of the bed and the bed posts. Nice job.

 

PS: The curtain rod either seems too high over the door, or the door height seems too low compared to the curtain rods? Might want to shorten them width-wise too and show another curtain on the right sneaking into the view.

 

Looks better lighter like that.

 

Keep it up.

[SandmanNinja]

Hi...

 

The exterior light warms the room.

 

I'd maybe consider something in the foreground - an oval rug, maybe?

 

How high is the ceiling? There does seem to be extra space between the top of the door and the ceiling - unless it's an unusually high ceiling or low door.

 

(I use a 1.82m Biped to help give things scale when I do stuff like this)

 

Looks good - What software and render engine are you using?

[NgoJennifer]

hey. I was in the process is posting it when I got your msg Joel, haha. I'll see what I can do about that rug. Here is an update:

 

The walls are about 2.75 M in height. I used a Bi-ped of my height..and the door looked pretty high to that.. haha. Oh is that a typical height? i'll use that one then =]

 

Im using 3D studio Max and.. Mental Ray. The funny thing was, I tried using Vray... I heard and have seen that it's great with stuff like this. It crashed. It wasn't that high of settings, just basic. It closed without warning... so I never tried that again... well at least not for now.

 

 

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/pooka88/DaySceneI.jpg

[tanni]

Floor reflection are mirror look, light will reflect more rather object, and you have to work with light because bed side table is flat look.

[NgoJennifer]

Hey Tanvir. Thanks for those comments. You are very right! that table does look flat. But im a little confused on what you meant by " light will reflect more rather object". Could you explain that a bit? I've made the adjustments. What do you guys think?

 

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/pooka88/DaySceneO.jpg

[SandmanNinja]

Looking good!

The rugs look good. Here's a trick/tip I do for rugs:

Switch to top viewport

Switch to Vert Select mode

Select a couple rows of verts (skinny-way) and drag them a touch so the rug looks more natural.

I do this once or twice and the rug looks heaps more photorealistic.

 

Liking the light and shadows coming in from outside - but it does look a touch bright out there.

Not a bad thing - I've seen lots of photos taken like that.

 

I guess the scene is "back lit", and that will cause the objects in the foreground to be naturally dark/shadowy.

Maybe a small light (60 watt?), near the camera (out of view), that will brighten this side up a touch and provide a good counterpoint for the bright sun.

 

Just an idea.

 

Good 'em coming!

[sudark]

great improvement. keep it up.

 

in the last image, im seeing a dark semi-circular object. maybe its an edge of a table or something. you should just hide it or photoshop it away. it doesnt do much for the composition and might just serve to distract viewers