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shopping mall animation


yorik
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Hi there,

I'm making an animation of a small open-air shopping mall... I find it okay, but not more than okay, if you understand me. I don't know what's wrong... I have the impression that the lighting doesn't fall well... I think I passed too much time in front of it, I cannot get any new idea...

 

I would be grateful if anyone could have a look and give me some comments, critics & ideas... The image below is the first frame of the animation. If you want to see the whole anim, I put a compressed version here for download (mp4 avi). It's about 14Mb.

 

Thanks & cheers

 

Yorik

 

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Not too bad, as you as OK but could be better.

 

A couple of things to try

 

1) reduce the contrast a little as well as the saturation

2) Change the RPC trees for geometry trees, the rotating shadows are distracting

3) Map the backround image onto a sphere rather that just in the backround

 

jhv

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