zeniamai Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 Pre-final render... Comments are very welcome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 You should use a better quality background - the jpg compression is very noticeable and detracts from the rest of the image. I just did some quick adjustments to give you some ideas... Reduced the overall gamma, increased the contrast, reduced the mid blues (all only slight. Also "burnt" the left-hand side of the person to try and put his shadows on the correct side. Most noticeable is the crop - if you think of the composition as a "story"... you spent one third of the book describing the carpark. The line markings could also use the same bump as the road surface to make them seem more realistic. Hope this helps, S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeniamai Posted April 25, 2008 Author Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thanks for the comment... I will work on this image and I will post the updated rendering really soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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