Project #1 - Vaulted Ceilings

[SandmanNinja]

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This is the first project in the ArchViz class at http://www.cgworkshops.com

C&C encouraged and welcomed.

 

3DS 2008, Mental Ray, MRSun, MRSky, A&D materials where I could, Architectural materials elsewhere, some random JPGs as textures.

The BiPed is 1.82m and is for scale.

 

The textures aren't fixed - we're going to do more next week with this (I assume).

[Horhe]

Hi Joel,

 

The composition of the first image is off a bit. Would look better with a less floor and more celing shot.

That bip looks way off in terms of proportions. I see you are inserting it everywhere you can for some time now I think it takes away even from a sketch. Why dont you try using a lowpoly model or even better a transparent silouette from a 2d libary. Good luck with further classes.

Not much to add since its your first class and youll take this higher.

Edited May 23, 2008 by Horhe

[SandmanNinja]

Hi Jakub,

 

Heheh yeah, me and 'Fred' go back a long way.

 

The lens are pretty darn wide angle, so I'm guessing that's why it looks a bit out of proportion. He's pretty close to the 2nd camera.

 

I agree about the first render - that's why I brought the camera target up and dropped the height of the camera for the 2nd render.

 

I think I was trying to show off the reflections in the floor in the first one, and you can definately see the arches better in the 2nd.

 

Thanks for the feedback. Week #1 down - 7 to go!

[SandmanNinja]

Added the 2nd storey and some arches in the outer wall.

 

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[SandmanNinja]

http://www.dhimaging.com.au/3D/ArchViz/vt1/main.html

 

Vaulted project week is finished.

 

I presented it as a virtual tour with a spherical image rendered in the exact centre, about 1/2 metre above the ground.

[Horhe]

Nice! Congrats on finishing your first class!

One crits though... shame there is no background behind the entrances... a row of trees just to cover up the horizon would do nicely.