Warm welcome for useful advises and corrections

[madmaden]

Hi friends

I am a new face in this group

I am a interior designer working in Middle East, I have not that much experience in V-Ray rendering And lighting ,But I am a very good fan of good Visualizer’s who has creating stunning interior and exterior views by using V-ray and max .

Now here I am presenting one of my works for your suggestions

I know I have lot to learn in v ray

And I am very keen to learn also,

Warm welcome for useful advises and corrections –that makes me more and more perfect in this field

thanks to all

 

subi

[SandmanNinja]

I think this is a very good scene! Attention to detail - windows desktop on the computer, the photograph on the wall - very well done.

 

The only thing I can see off is the noise on top of the arm closest to the camera of the chair. But that is a very minor point compared to the entire image.

[Nic H]

some quick things I notice straight away that could improve it

 

- model the actual light fittings

- get bigger less tiling textures and watch the mapping on the couches

- chamfer / fillet some of the hard edges to catch highlights

- turn that tv off, the picture on it looks weird and attracts too much attention

- desaturate teh whole scene (reds mostly) a bit in post and add some subtle glow to the lights.

- rotate / scale those plants so they arent exact copies.

- I think the composiston could be improved, so the corner and tv arent righjt in the middle.

 

coming along well though.

[madmaden]

Thank you very much for your valuable comments,

of course I will keep this suggestions in my next work-

I am sure it will make difference in output

 

once again thanks a lot

 

Regards

 

subin

[Thablanch]

lights fixtures, they look pasted on ceiling, and not perforated in the ceiling