mdbassett Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 Hi All, Looking for some feed back on attached interior office view [work in progress]. All comments welcome you can even give it a rating 1 - 10 [1 = not good, 10 great] it will give me a view of how good or bad my cgi is. VectorWorks / Cinema 4d, no photoshop post effects. M. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khu Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 hi there, i think your lighting might be a little blown-out for this interior space. it looks too bright. also, maybe check your final gather settings? you have some of those "spot Light" effects on your image in the upper left corner of the room. the textures aren't too bad, though I would look at how much you intend to stretch them and maybe applying some more... bump map with the ceiling tiles? it's on it's way though! good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machmirdenlukas Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 +2, sorry mate, as stated above.. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karolisbilz@yahoo.com Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 smth's wrong with shadows and u should redesign the round glass table and the red chairs, cause they look out of shape and scale from each other....table looks streatched out and the chairs look too tall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BillyElNino Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Aside from the lighting issue everything is looking stretched and squashed on the right hand side of the image. This is exaggerated by the strange 'man on a laptop' artwork on the wall and the glass table and chairs which are not believable. The reflecting wall to the right of the image is also not reading as a specific material. If it is a glass mirror material it would not be dull like this and if it is meant to be a metal / chrome sheet the reflections may be distorted or broken up. I also think your white and black chairs may be missing a phong tag as either I can see the facets or its a texture? I would also reconsider what is going to be on the reception desk. Its not very likely to be just a monitor poking up through the desk. On the plus side I like the room glass dividers and the carpet / mesh flooring material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mdbassett Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 Thanks all, keep them coming. I will attempt [time permitting] to re do the image taking on board comments. But as I say keep them coming. M. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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