jinsley Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Still waiting to hear back from the landscaper and structural, but thought I would post this preliminary image for an upcoming project... comments and crits would be greatly appreciated. -JI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
litleboy Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 looks good but out of scale, perhaps the background buildings have a skyscraper shape but are almost the same size of your 7 story building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Reminds me of your previous image. Need details - maybe smth behind the windows, some desks, celing lights etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 what software are you using??? is that background gradient straight out of max or has it been added in PS? also: not sure if its meant to be, but it looks like a small physical model that you might see in an architects reception area Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lester_Masterson Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 I would make the benches and plants white too. Draw attention away from the peripherals. Make your building the focus! /don't put my office in the cantilever. That look downright frightening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ky Lane Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 Cool design. Kudos to the architect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blowback Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 looks good for a start. You might want to stop the gi / reflect from the roof, creating that reflection / highlite on the wall. +1 with the other comments. rock on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted June 19, 2008 Author Share Posted June 19, 2008 Thx all for the comments... it does need alot of work, I have been pulled off onto a tower project though so it might be a few days before an update... rendered with Mental Ray in max... a little post work done in photoshop (sky = blue gradient + black radial gradient on a soft light blend...) same materials as the last image... I worry a little about keeping the images being created consistent to set a standard as to what I am producing. Do alot of arch. viz. people out there worry about this??? or is it just me? It does look like a small scale model, now that you mention it... hopefully when I pop in the actual context building adjacent to the site this will change... the buildings in this image were created quickly with greeble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neko Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 james you're not seriously going to get away with that cantilever, are you ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted June 19, 2008 Author Share Posted June 19, 2008 james you're not seriously going to get away with that cantilever, are you ? haha... nah, I just don't have any of the structural info yet... and I'm waiting on the landscapers too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 any chance you could give more info on the light setup and render settings and also how you go about getting the sky in there, not too familiar with photoshop, i'm guessin its somethin to do with replacing the alpha channel maybe??? anyway info on lighting and render setting would be appreciated cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blowback Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 ... I worry a little about keeping the images being created consistent to set a standard as to what I am producing. Do alot of arch. viz. people out there worry about this??? or is it just me? I worry about that all the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neko Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 haha... nah, I just don't have any of the structural info yet... and I'm waiting on the landscapers too... sure - don't let a little detail like building structure get in the way of a good image. i could give you some suggestions on where you might need it ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted June 19, 2008 Author Share Posted June 19, 2008 no, I won't... I added basic columns on an eight meter grid... I figure that is pretty typical... will post an updated image soon... What are you up to this summer Paul? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vboyz Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 good concept dude..but vray sometimes not good in big scence like this..i still strugle to find good settings... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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