muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 Hi all, I am currently doing this project just wanted toi share with u guys so that I can improve on it as much as pSBL. I have used max2009 and mental ray and Pshop for the image. If anything cliks to ur mind please do let me know so that i can improve on it further. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted July 9, 2008 Author Share Posted July 9, 2008 If anything cliks to ur mind please do let me know so that i can improve on it further. Yes for sure what i can mark is those planters (creepers in balconies) they are looking really crap I will have to change them all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parker2740 Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 I think everything looks really good, but the colors delineating the buildings are too primary in nature. I would dull the color slightly and maybe add a highlight and shadow to make them more three-dimensional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted July 9, 2008 Author Share Posted July 9, 2008 I think everything looks really good, but the colors delineating the buildings are too primary in nature. I would dull the color slightly and maybe add a highlight and shadow to make them more three-dimensional. Thanks Parker I had the same sugession but the architect wants only that white and the sunken portion in that dull green grey sort of. I will make the changes as ur sugession and render it again and show it to the architect he might will open his eyes then for a better option Thanks for the sugession Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sardesign Posted July 10, 2008 Share Posted July 10, 2008 the colors don't bother me that much... but it's too bad that the parting walls that run through the roof top are not the colored portion. What is the sunken portion of the building... walkways? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anindia Posted July 10, 2008 Share Posted July 10, 2008 i personally think the white color is overbright. it really needs a kind of shade/contrast. Otherwise i like everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jameson101 Posted July 10, 2008 Share Posted July 10, 2008 Hey there muchha Good renders, nice, clean. Your first shot that you can see all most of the buildings is the money shot. You must keep that camera angle for the finals. The front angle is a bit to head on for me, personally I dont like it, also that car going through the entrance is way to green. Your arial view is good, I dont like the faded trees though, But I know how hard it is to create arial foliage in photoshop. Also the shadow of the building onto the pavement is Blue? Like very blue. Cant wait to see the updated renders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted July 10, 2008 Author Share Posted July 10, 2008 Hey there muchha Dear my name is Sandeep MUCHHAL thr are some changes minute from the architect. I will make those changes and will come back with the final renders. now i m also feeling the issue of white color and yes the camera angle 2 is an issue architect also raised he also wants one side to be seen along with it. I am currently making those changes. actually my machine is not able to render those scenes (till now i was using my colleuge's now its busy). I have ordered a new machine as soon as i get it first task will be rendering these images. hope fully will comeback in a day or 2 thanks for replies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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