Erazor Posted July 20, 2008 Share Posted July 20, 2008 Here's the lattest work that I've been working on. Comments and critiques are more than welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Matthews Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 Great start. The first thing that jumps at me is the desaturation of the background image and the weird perspective. I think you would get a lot more bang for the buck if you took more of a human perspective. There is a lot of different scale to the building that I think you lose at this height. I would also change the sun position so that you get more depth with the shadows. Currently you are washing out the white values in the front of the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ky Lane Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 Looks nice so far, very blue tho - check your whitebalance. Also, get some better grass, and the tiles, use a procedural to try and limit the tiling appearance. Some more tree's around the fenceline too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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