First WIP post, a tall building vray

[kbotnen]

Hi.

 

This is my first wip (work) post in this forum. The reason why I post is that I know that feedback, comments and critics is what can make me better to do what I do. In the scene I have created four different camera angles, where I personally think pic 1 and 2 is the most "dramatic" choices. As title state: Its done in Vray, and 3Ds max. Grass is VrayDisplacement. No post work.

 

I have to state that I only did the lightning and texturing on this one. No modelling is done by me.

 

Low angle:

Midup angle:

Topdown angle:

Overview angle:

 

-K-

[nodar1978]

very nice rendering,lightings,

I'm not expert but as i see, i think you have to do something with background, the rest is fine

[stylEmon]

nice dramaitc lighting. the foreground is lacking

[rcossoli]

good shots especially the second where they are in a good corner windows in "L"

[SandmanNinja]

A building like that will have a large asphalt parking area near it, yes? Be sure to put "Earth Friendly" areas in the parking lot - grass, trees, etc.

 

I'd put a Potted Plant or Tree on most of the balconies.

 

I see a side door entrance - I'd put a concrete footpath going up to it.

[lucho]

i like your images, the first and the second looks nice, perhaps the others need a lightning work and i suggest to change the grass it looks not real.

Good work, continue with the enhancements

[ankit4d]

nice work