nodar1978 Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 hi guys, here is my renderings ro exterior, max and vray. it is not finished yet, i'm working on but would be nice to hear your comments. i should change the grass in photoshop but please tell me comments about other things. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodar1978 Posted July 25, 2008 Author Share Posted July 25, 2008 sorry here are the images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodar1978 Posted July 26, 2008 Author Share Posted July 26, 2008 no critics and advices? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murtazasimari Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 grass need to be correct...its look like a green matte Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edwardalves54 Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 Needs alot more work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malevy Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 I think it looks good. The grass definitely needs to be redone Needs alot more work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bingm Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 I think you should lessen the grass color bleeding, add some reflections to the glass windows and some bump/displacement map on your grass. Other than that, the image looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodar1978 Posted July 27, 2008 Author Share Posted July 27, 2008 hello guys thanks for comments, here are 2 renderings with new grass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadi3d Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 hello everything is soooo green u need to adjust the mapping of the wood keep at it u'll get there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 They're looking better. I think you're 3D isn't matching the background image very well. I took one image and in Photoshop, I reduced the colour saturation to match the background (Image>Adjustments>Hue/Saturation) and then added a bit of colour to the sky, then using the curves (Image>Adjustments>Curves), I lightened the image. I then put a very slight colour filter over the whole image (Image>Adjustments>Photo Filter) Warming Filter (85) at 14%. I know it's not perfect, but it only took a few minutes to do and I hope it helps and gives you some ideas. S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 Sorry Nodar, I couldn't help myself...had to play with the white balance and drop a sky in the background. Please excuse the rough Photoshop work, I was just experimenting. Again, I hope it helps... S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbotnen Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 There is something wrong with your grass. Maybe there is no uvw map, or it should be tiled more. You could also try with a displace/fur/bump grass. Would like to see some reflections in the windows too. Try a IOR around 1,4 - 1,6, do a render with and one without Fresnel reflecion (just to see the differences), and try one render with white reflection and one with grey (maybe 90,90,90) just to see the differences. I think that might give something extra to the image Nice trees and house, keep up the good work -K- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
birdman67 Posted July 28, 2008 Share Posted July 28, 2008 I would also raise the camera target of the last image to show less foreground and more sky/trees. Looks good so far though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stylEmon Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 definitly too much bounce off the grass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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