Dave Buckley Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 Guys please say what you like and don't like about this. Half way through texturing, Just want to get a feel for your opinions on how its going. Mental Ray and max design 2009 Please don't comment on the wheelie bins, i know they don't look very natural yet, and there is some floating text in front of them (needs fixing and i'm possible gonna get rid of that particular bin model anyway. Provided by client Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted August 20, 2008 Author Share Posted August 20, 2008 Just done a quick reworked one with the sky replaced and also minus the bins and floating text, also tried to sharpen it up a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SandmanNinja Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 bricks look a touch too big. the area above the entry would be perfect for a balcony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Oliver Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 nice attention to detail in the modeling trees in the background would definitely look nice, even if there arent really any. when you get more textures on, if you get the sun at a lower angle you can get a pretty cool specular reflection off the brick (which is very large at the moment) i would suggest using displacement for the roof shingles it has worked well for me on the little shed part, the space between the top of the windows and the low slope roof does not seem big enough for joists Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Tizard Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hi, Things that stand out to me: 1) Bricks are way too big 2) Door in front pod seems too small 3) Roof over pod requires flashing 4) Render should be proud of the brickwork 5) Trees in front gardens seem too small scale-wise Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlAhearne Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 As already metioned, the bricks are way too big if they are supposed to be a standard brick (225*122.5*75 working size); yours look about twice as big as they should be... Another thing, all of the edges look a little too sharp; work on rounding them slightly to give you better highlights around the edges. The fence looks nice; lots of detail in there, so a good material/texture will just make that look even better... It's a very strange design at the front of the house, but I guess thats not in your hands... Other than that, it's looking good; looking forward to seeing how is progresses. Carl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 Render should be proud of the brickwork Please explain this one?? All comments noted guys and will be worked on. With regards to the roof, i have tiles that have been modelled that will be going on there. But cheers for the crits guys, gives me something to work with. Will post updates when they are done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Tizard Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 Render is applied outside of the extent of the external envelope and will therefore cast a shadow on the brickwork below: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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