ryu00 Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 hi, i would like your opinions and critisisms over the following exterior i have been working on. personally im not overly happy with the reflections in the downstairs window, maybe i need an image to reflect or to add more detail, maybe make the glass refractive and have a blend of the interior with the reflections. would love to hear positives and negatives, thanks in advance.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lucho Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 Hi, yes you have to enhance the reflections, and add some light reflected at the windows, another thing is that the cornice of the building is very gray, change the color to looks smooth, the texture at the walls looks an intersting pattern, if you put some of grainess here the image could looks better. Good luck Lucho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Erazor Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 Hi, I would change the asphalt as it's too shiny and get rid of that ?railing? on the left side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 composition is great the bricks look a touch too big unless you're using concrete blocks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murtazasimari Posted August 31, 2008 Share Posted August 31, 2008 you need more trial to get final result the shadows, colors, reflection lots more thing which you need to enhance your work..the scene looks not natural which render are you using??? anyway keep trying and best of luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REDVERTEX Posted August 31, 2008 Share Posted August 31, 2008 you can starrt with changing the image aspect ratio. Now there is no air in the image. Full House! More air around the building and you can add some camera correction for vertical edges. It looks better and it's a standart in architectural rendering long time ago .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryu00 Posted August 31, 2008 Author Share Posted August 31, 2008 thanks guys.. my computer limitations kinda reflect the scene setup, those 3d trees absolutely kill my viewport when turned on and trying to move them around, anymore and ouch. hence attempting to make the building the sole object visible. the railing at the side is actually a bike rack to lock your bike to. ican you please elaborate on the shadows, colours, reflections etc what i need to be aiming for, im quite new to exterior rendering and obviously need to learn from other peoples advice that im grateful for. im using vray by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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