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macia19
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Hi !

You have a lot to work, but this is a good start. Here are some ideas at 1st glance:

 

1. composition is not good and the view poit. For the begginning try to work only on low situated view points. It's easier.

 

2. Light sourse must be shifted as you don't have shadows around the entrance porches. It's better to have shadows

 

3. you need more 3D details in the model.

 

Go ahead. Good Luck ! ;)

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hey there,

At first glace the modeling looks good, I just dont know what im looking at.

There is no focal point and when im looking at it I am just trying to figure out what is going on.

It would help changeing the dark grey ground material.

What is the project? what are you trying to achieve?

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