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Tommy L
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A little something Ive been working on in my spare time. Im thinking of hanging a jacket over one of the stools, but Ive not done anything like that before. Im currently rendering some glassesa nearer the camera too.

 

Any comments/crits much appreciated.

 

Thanks,

Tom.

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Hi Tom, at first sight looks like a HDR picture :cool:, I love it. The only comment can be that in the stools I can see the faceting, and about the jacket can be a good idea but that might work against the comp if you use it in a wrong place or use wrong materials ;)

 

Cheers

Juan Carlos

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this is great... when i zoom in, i can see some noise in your darker areas, but thats pretty close in. what software are you using?

 

also, about the bar... i like the bumpy look. you obviously got it just right, and if the client wants that material, you have to give it to him. and the way you did it was spot on.

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Nice work on the lighting and composition.

 

I did notice the faceting on the chairbacks though. I find the image somewhat clinical....

 

I think it could greatly benefit from some mundane props to get a bit of narrative going...empty glasses, spilled beer/spirits, crumpled napkin and perhaps a couple talking in the background...

 

...just a thought of course.

 

It will be interesting to see what you add to this.

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