Tommy L Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 A little something Ive been working on in my spare time. Im thinking of hanging a jacket over one of the stools, but Ive not done anything like that before. Im currently rendering some glassesa nearer the camera too. Any comments/crits much appreciated. Thanks, Tom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arqjuan Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 Hi Tom, at first sight looks like a HDR picture , I love it. The only comment can be that in the stools I can see the faceting, and about the jacket can be a good idea but that might work against the comp if you use it in a wrong place or use wrong materials Cheers Juan Carlos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Tizard Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Very, very nice image. Keep the updates coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SandmanNinja Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Very nice. The DOF really makes the scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amer abidi Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Excellent! i see a couple of espresso machines behind the bar.. Point of sales screen, and an approned waitress blurred in the background.. the plot is amazing, now tell the story!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pipjor Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 (edited) nice, but i'm not sure about the finish for the bar, weird bump??... maybe wood would look nice Edited September 9, 2008 by pipjor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3dimagen Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 congratulations, very very nice imagen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 9, 2008 Author Share Posted September 9, 2008 Thanks guys. I would have an update today,l but I forgot to unset the render-time reset in BB. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 No beer? Looks nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antisthenes Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 that is beautiful work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfured20 Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 this is great... when i zoom in, i can see some noise in your darker areas, but thats pretty close in. what software are you using? also, about the bar... i like the bumpy look. you obviously got it just right, and if the client wants that material, you have to give it to him. and the way you did it was spot on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 9, 2008 Author Share Posted September 9, 2008 Its a concrete bar. The noise was added in post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claudio Branch Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Nice work on the lighting and composition. I did notice the faceting on the chairbacks though. I find the image somewhat clinical.... I think it could greatly benefit from some mundane props to get a bit of narrative going...empty glasses, spilled beer/spirits, crumpled napkin and perhaps a couple talking in the background... ...just a thought of course. It will be interesting to see what you add to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 9, 2008 Author Share Posted September 9, 2008 Thanks Claudio, no client so I can take this wherever I like. Mundane objects are next on the list... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pipjor Posted September 10, 2008 Share Posted September 10, 2008 concrete bar??, sorry yours looks kinda like vinyl or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 10, 2008 Author Share Posted September 10, 2008 Thank you mr hansen. there are many kinds of concrete, however i agree it does look rather like vinyl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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