Corporate office in hyderabad india

[arunblr]

wip rendering of an corporate office in hyderabad india

critics and comments are welcome.

[STRAT]

both images getting there, but badly let down by poor use and comping of the RPC peeps - their colours and contrasts are completely wrong, they duplicate, and dont have comping shadows.

 

image 1 - looking nice with good lighting, but peeps are wrong (as mentioned), the car on the r/h side needs more work, and the foliage in general gives a false impression of scale.

 

image 2 - peeps again. also, the sky is too dramatic - just shift the map over. it's giving a halo and false lighting to the tree planes in front of it. you need generally better AA. and the stone texture needs more work to make it look right.

 

the white walls around the planting areas have strange shadowing too.

 

 

Coming on nicely though, keep going.

[kippu]

added to above , your glass needs work or atleast i am not seeing the verticals aand i am pretty positive that the scale in the stone work is wrong

[arunblr]

thank you kippu and strat for your comments i will rectify it in the final renderings

[Ivan_m]

The two images are too dark in my opinion. You can work with the levels. Also the texture of the stone in front of the building is pretty low-res. I don't think it's the best grass you can make, try to play with the hue and saturation in photoshop to look more natural. The trees on the background - they look sharp in their edges. Try to defringe them with photoshop, maybe 1 or 2 px. Also for the sky - try to make it more bright, now it's too dark.