vistas house

[Dave Oliver]

1st rendering for this project.

 

looks pretty computer-ish.

 

i think some of the problem might be in color mapping, or in the textures also. im pretty good up to getting the indirect illumination set up but theres not a lot that explains the relationships between that and color mapping and textures.

[Horhe]

Generally looks nice.

The scale of the grass blades, some of the flowers/shrubs and the stone material tile on the right seem off, too big.

The reflection in the windows could be cranked up, meaning reflect something less blurry and pephaps show some of the interior? Or are they supposed to be high glossy windows?

Adding a person will definetaly not only liven up the image, but introduce a better feel of scale in the image.

[Dave Oliver]

ok i think i have the color mapping beaten into submission now.

 

i still need to actually layout some plants that will look good together i should just send the file to my mom for that part.

 

any comments are welcome this is about as good as i know how to make it look.

[3dimagen]

its better this renders.

[Aaron Waller]

Nice work love the overall look, it could use some post production work. Keep up the great work.

[innerdream]

Better. It's the materials and saturation of the plants that are hurting you, also the grass is still out of scale. Try less diffuse on the materials and plants and less saturation in post even if not the original render.

[Dave Oliver]