Hotel room @Bandung

[ronyuni]

hi.

this is my WIP project

from the architect, its suppose to be "the whitest hotel building" in bandung

that make less color in scene.

CIC welcome

[Dave Oliver]

your modeling and texturing looks pretty decent

 

but that guy in the shower is creeping me out.

 

and the lack of color really draws attention to iorn man (which im sure you have permission to use) and that door. is that door important enough to draw attention to? youd think you would only have color on the most important design feature of the room

 

and there are no windows and i cant say it looks like a hotel room at all. at least have a phone or something recognizable, i cant identify much in the room that really looks like it belongs in a hotel room.

 

your lights are burning out your textures. you could work with settings and color mapping forever or just use linear workflow, which is much easier than explainations of it would make it sound.

[Ky Lane]

Whats with the dude fully dressed in the shower cubicle with the evil grin?

[SandmanNinja]

He is scary...

 

"Order now and we'll include a Stalker™*"

 

* limit one stalker per room, while supplies last

[ronyuni]

delete the wired guy..

add some color to scene..

change focus to the poster..

adding Rugs..

 

still need your C&C..

[innerdream]

delete the wired guy..

add some color to scene..

change focus to the poster..

adding Rugs..

 

still need your C&C..

 

Lookin better. The purple might be to saturated and I think you have some scale issues with the little love seat. A bed and a chair should have about the same height - 18" +-.