Tommy L Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 small part of a project Im working on. Its for an interioir designer, never done much with interior designers, they dont half change their minds alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dinhtuan Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 NIce DoF. Did you focus on the curtain ? very nice material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shamim Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Good. But i think you have to work hard for advance lighting system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nice DOF I agree but possibly too much as it is hard to see what it is you are actually focusing on. Possibly need more interesting subject matter than a curtain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amer abidi Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I think the DOF is too much that its actually distracting from the content of the image. other than that, it has great potential! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thanks for the comments guys. I agree the focus of the image is rather benign. Shamim, I dont quite understand your comment, maybe something a little lost in translation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jophus14 Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 It starts..........Hahaha. Looks good so far. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 26, 2008 Author Share Posted September 26, 2008 change of focus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iridescence Posted September 27, 2008 Share Posted September 27, 2008 The lighting is super!! But I think there are some problems in the composition. What is that you are looking at? The lamp? If that's the case you shouldn't focus it in the center of the frame. And the camera position - it looks like you're standing in a very tight place thus giving uncomfortable fealing while looking at the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle Posted September 30, 2008 Share Posted September 30, 2008 I think your DOF works a lot better with your second image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Tizard Posted September 30, 2008 Share Posted September 30, 2008 Much better with the changed DOF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted September 30, 2008 Share Posted September 30, 2008 The modeling and textures look good and the idea has potential but I'm not sold. The bed looks blown out by the lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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