tayrona Posted October 11, 2008 Share Posted October 11, 2008 Hi, we would like C&C about this reel... thanks http://www.vimeo.com/1930807 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted October 11, 2008 Share Posted October 11, 2008 I really liked the way you put the real together! Must have a taken quite a bit of time and effort, nice job. My CC is that I wish you would have done higher quality images before you did the animation. The animation outshines the actual rendered scenes. None the less it's a very nice real. Best of luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nic H Posted October 11, 2008 Share Posted October 11, 2008 i think its quiet good! only things I would say is that I reckon it could be half the length, only include the best best best bits. Also alot of those shots could do with a bit of post work on them so they dont look so 'straight out of the frame buffer' things like subtle vignetting, pushing the contrast further, color correcting / balancing some shots to have more vivid colours. looking pretty good though for a WIP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted October 11, 2008 Author Share Posted October 11, 2008 thanks a lot, kind words from innerdream and nicnic... I would like it to be half length too...... will work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatch Posted October 12, 2008 Share Posted October 12, 2008 When you cut the time down you should consider speeding up some of your shots as you have a dance track to slow camera moves, might spice things up a little. Also i dont think the sound effects add anything. Good start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amer abidi Posted October 12, 2008 Share Posted October 12, 2008 Love the content, not too fond of the audio though. Also agree on length..should be about half as long. Some great work in there! well done! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveSin Posted October 13, 2008 Share Posted October 13, 2008 Looks awesome but yeah work on the length and tempo. I would keep it under a minute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Messy Posted October 22, 2008 Share Posted October 22, 2008 Hi Tayrona This is my first post after a long time looking but I had to say something about your showreel (i'm a kiddie-play 3D designer but LOVE the stuff on this board) Great work and would hire you from the first 30 seconds alone I actually like the audio and think the speed is fine. It allows you to look around at the detail. The first top to side view switch made me go wow (outloud) and I love the TSB office setup. Went a little nuts there with the side wipes but all the work is top notch The music change jolted me out of it a little but until then I was hooked so I agree with the length comments. Looking forward to seeing the final. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted October 25, 2008 Author Share Posted October 25, 2008 Thanks a lot messy, we are working in final edition, coming soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmccoy Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 Your demo reel looks very nice. I would agree with some of the above comments. Some images need a little color correction and some contrast added as they look a little flat. The music change threw me off a bit also. I really enjoyed the office scene where the cubicles are added. Some of the first transitions were really good. Looks good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted October 28, 2008 Author Share Posted October 28, 2008 Thanks a lot Ross... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 Finally, we are almost done, here is the reel last release... is shorter and we tried to adjust some details in post. Thanks in advance for all c & c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amer abidi Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 nicely done! still a tad bit too long IMO, but much better! well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted November 14, 2008 Author Share Posted November 14, 2008 Thanks amer..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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