ravi_chawda1981 Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Hi Please comment on my work C&C are most welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravi_chawda1981 Posted October 23, 2008 Author Share Posted October 23, 2008 Please give your valuable suggestions to improve my work......, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 put out whatever you are smoking and go lie down for a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravi_chawda1981 Posted October 23, 2008 Author Share Posted October 23, 2008 What? Sorry I dont Understand? you dont like it? or any thing i ve done wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 I guessthat doesnt translate very well... Is it your design? Its a crazy building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Seems youve got one of those monitors that pivot 360 degrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 The landscape looks nice, the building ummm...maybe not so nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iain Denby Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Hmmmmm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Hmmmmm. agreed. btw Iain, is this period of avatar change the mid-life crises setting in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iain Denby Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 ha. Maybe....I'm probably getting past that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floraworks Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 i think it looks quite cool!! something a little different could need a little more tweeks and better textures:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nic H Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 i think you need to push it alot further in everyway if you want it to have some artistic merit. make it less 'arch-vis' style and make the building crazier imo. people / planting are terrible, they dont match the lighting and look like an afterthought. whats the purpose / intent behind this image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BillyElNino Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 people / planting are terrible, they dont match the lighting and look like an afterthought. I agree with this. Especially the small palms to the right and the lighting of the people to the left. Way off. The building underneath the upside down building also needs a lot of work. It has no textures and the images for shops are very flat. I think the texture for the old upside down wall is a little too big as well. Upper windows are flat. Needs to be picking up something in the reflection. What's the point of this? I think if you're just creating something weird for the sake of it you need to master the process THEN mess it up. I suppose the comparison is to art where you have fine art skills first then you do a load of scribbles on a piece of paper and its called abstract. If you cut straight to the scribbles its just rubbish. I'm rambling now...! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 and the palm fronds should hang down, not up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CHE Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Your rendering reminds me of the upside down building in Orlando, FL http://lh4.ggpht.com/_XE3tfEH0ZEc/Rj-MDU-_czI/AAAAAAAAAMo/-YQvGuS8kCg/Orlando+ASQ+008.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravi_chawda1981 Posted October 25, 2008 Author Share Posted October 25, 2008 Hey thank u all for your suggestion Its a complex Building and the client, I am just visualising it and clients his building something different so result you can see. I will keep in mind the advices given by you and show you my work as soon as possibly Thank you all again Ravi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 you mean someone is actually thinking of building this ? ... wow hes weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 Much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 If you want a two second fix, just move the sun to the right for both more drama, and so the lighting on the building is closer to the lighting on the people. The windows on this building are dead and flat. They need a lot of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perspectivo3d Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 WOWwww:eek: Have you ever studied in architecture design before? I think the design has a powerful creativity if it been a some kind of design concept for development. Actually I can design something like this if I've smoke some weeds or a bottle of wine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTI Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 It reminds me with the ABBA'S song "upside down ,dancing on the ceiling " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbotnen Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 Actually I can design something like this if I've smoke some weeds or a bottle of wine How do you smoke a bottle of wine? About the image. A image like that comes with an idea, a vision or at least some sentence about its purpose. I would love to hear it. Its all about setting the mood and expectations. About the design. Personally it did not feel right to me. But that doesnt have anything to do with the viz job. About the general quality of the viz, I agree with most of what have been pointed out already. The part below doesnt match the part on top. Thats the first thing I would have worked on. I would probably ditched all the peoples in the image too, and surrounded the buildings with a vegetation frame or something instead. Creating a more 'artistic' style of image, instead of trying to achieve photo realistic. You have a good start of that kind of frame, but you have to color correct your vegetation to match the colorscheme of rest of the picture. Yeah yeah. Keep us updated -K- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murtazasimari Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 wot is this.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelfoZ Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 The design is horrible, old architecture but rotated, i disagree with the creativity on this. new is not always good. Well maybe this is going to be in disneyland ? im still in shock ... the image needs more drama, thats for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andreg Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 Can you send me your pusher's coordinates please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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