Exterior

[vakis]

Hey guys can you give me some feedbacks.

[vakis]

another render

[jasondutoit]

Hi Vakis! I think its a good start so far, and the modelling looks good.

 

Right...a few points. Fistly, the grass texture in the first image is out of proportion. You should try using a grass texture that you can tile, similar to the attachment. Secondly, there's not enough contrast in the image...it looks kinda 'washed out'.

 

I would add gutters etc. to the roof because it looks odd that the roof sits 'directly' on top of the walls. Its good that you've added some tree models, but they're a bit too blocky, and there's no textures on the trees, so it'd probably be better if you use photoshop (Or something similar like G.I.M.P) to add some photo's of trees, although this is less versatile than good quality 3d trees. If you have the time, you should also add some more small details...maybe some grass and plants in the garden, paving in the driveway...that sort of thing.

 

As for your vray settings...I personally wouldn't play around with the linear muliply settings. Leave them on their default setting, and then search for some tutorials on setting up 'Linear work flow' for max...its really worth it!

 

Good luck