Spacelord Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 Hi there, Its an interesting piece of architecture I should be able to make this look better but I'm stuck. Do you guys have any suggestions ? Some things I don't like are the crummy centary plants in front of the wet wall. I'd like to add the blue night time/ dusk tinge. What do you think of the Camera angle ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 I think you are trying to show too much of the building in one shot, which is forcing a bit of a boring camera angle. Also, the sky is lovely, but doesn't seem to interact with the materials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacelord Posted November 6, 2008 Author Share Posted November 6, 2008 Thanks Tommy, There must be a good camera angle that shows the whole building. When I get a chance I'll do some close ups. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
art.chitect Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 I would like to make the foreground and background, to make a frame., so your corner won't be seem too empty. And make some adjustment using exposure in PS... I like Your lighting effect, NICE, but maybe You can use the darker sky.. GREAT!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacelord Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 (edited) Hehe Felix, framing with the trees again I'm going to use it this time cheers Edited November 7, 2008 by Spacelord adding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
art.chitect Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 hehe, one of my favourite, just simple but so effective to fill the empty space... hehehehe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 I think if you have your overall lighting, not the individual lights, coming from a direction that matches your sunset that will help. Right now when I look at the big wall there is no value change from either side of the wall, they are both in the same light which makes it look a bit flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacelord Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Thanks Robert, I'll play around with the skylight, I think once I get the blue tinge it should ground it more and add definition. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacelord Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 Okay I made some adjustments, I need to adjust the levels a bit and some of the interior lighting and then I'm happy with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Its better, but I still think that the only way to push this one further is to use a different camera view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacelord Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 If I get time I'll render some other camera views. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate Posted March 10, 2009 Share Posted March 10, 2009 The pool wall blocks look a little big to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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