Interior

[innerdream]

CC welcome. I don't know what else it needs.

 

There's no post yet, like on the back wall tiling.

Edited November 19, 2008 by innerdream

[mi75]

My opinion is that it needs a lived in or livable feel. If it was my image I'd put things in like a rug on the floor a painting or two on the walls, curtains or blinds for the windows etc......

 

Also the floor looks like a solid piece of wood, should it be floor boards? maybe play with the texture and mapping.

 

my 2c

Edited November 19, 2008 by mi75

[innerdream]

My opinion is that it needs a lived in or livable feel. If it was my image I'd put things in like a rug on the floor a painting or two on the walls, curtains or blinds for the windows etc......

 

Also the floor looks like a solid piece of wood, should it be floor boards? maybe play with the texture and mapping.

 

my 2c

 

Okay, thanks!

[Kawzy]

This is just my personal opinion, but it seems a bit dark, considering the number of openings that are allowing sunlight into the room. The furniture also looks a bit hard and the textures are seemingly flat. I also think the camera angle is a bit boring, looking too "straight through" the scene for my tastes. It seems to be coming along pretty nicely though. You'll have to post images of your progress.

[innerdream]

This is just my personal opinion, but it seems a bit dark, considering the number of openings that are allowing sunlight into the room. The furniture also looks a bit hard and the textures are seemingly flat. I also think the camera angle is a bit boring, looking too "straight through" the scene for my tastes. It seems to be coming along pretty nicely though. You'll have to post images of your progress.

 

Good points, thanks for the review.

[innerdream]

I'm probably not going to be able to take this any further, other commitments. Here's the last pass.