cundyscott Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 This is my first client work. It is a boat shed located in the Marlbourough Sounds in New Zealand. Just waiting on him to give me the colour palette. CC welcome. Renders are at low tide. Hence the really high position. Also the final renders will be composited into photos. http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=13799153jn6.jpg http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=80785150jd8.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Links don't work...for me, at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 getting there, but for photomontaging and being as it's work for a client, i think a hell of a lot more model detailing and a proper lighting solution is needed. the client's colour palette alone isn't enough, but hey, it's only wip stage as you say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Links don't work...for me, at least Ignore that - my goof! ...a hell of a lot more model detailing and a proper lighting solution is needed. the client's colour palette alone isn't enough, but hey, it's only wip stage as you say I'll second that. You might also want to increase the size of the ripples on the water although it's probably best to wait until you have the background image before you proceed with the water maps as it will govern the look of your rendered water. This one would also benefit enormously from reflective caustics, and as it's a relatively simple scene, it shouldn't be too time consuming to render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BillyElNino Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 i think a hell of a lot more model detailing Definitely agree with this. With a simple scene like this you can afford to bulk up model wise, get some great wood details in and you're going to need to find some great wood textures to go with it. Water ripples are reading as small too as mentioned above. And a boat, get a boat, I like boats. (Boat) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cundyscott Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 Yea i forgot to say that im also waiting to find out which way the wood panels on the walls go and for the floating dock and ramp. The main jetty is only there for reference for when I put the model into the photo. And the water was just to make the test renders look a bit more interesting, so im not fussed about the size of the ripples. Thanks for your comments though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cundyscott Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 Also the lighting was just an hdri sky map. Not the final lighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cundyscott Posted November 26, 2008 Author Share Posted November 26, 2008 Nearly finished the model. Just need to texture the floor. Once again waiting for comfirmation on colour. Let me know what I can improve. Cheers. http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20zl6.jpg http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=21oj4.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whori Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 textures looks well now, but do something with water..those waves or ripples .. i dont know how to call them, they are too near each other.its not realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cundyscott Posted November 26, 2008 Author Share Posted November 26, 2008 I cant really be bothered doing anything with the water because it wont be there in the final renders. I just used a texture I already had to make the test renders look a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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