mervin_lim23 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 some critique would be nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Hi, Looks good, but i think you need to change the exterior scene and do you have anti ailaising on?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Also... the small square footrest could do with some seams added to it like the sofas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mervin_lim23 Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 regarding the outside scene believe it or not it is the actual scene outside that room. i took an actual shot on site so i can use it as a background. and can you guy's help me to minimize the noise and robert yes i turned on antialiasing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mervin_lim23 Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 guy help me to minimize the noise. give some setting i could use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Do you have Photoshop for that exterior photo ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 I hope someone will be along soon to help you with your interior troubles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parker2740 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 I would put the background in in post. that way you will have better control of the image without having to re-render. the quality of the render is good but there is a disconnect between the outside image (daytime) and the interior(night time). I would increase the GI for the scene and perhaps artifically light the hallway and the top left corner of the room. It seems too dark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Good advice at last !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Did you use acad for the line work ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vrayschool Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 nice work , best wishes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mervin_lim23 Posted November 23, 2008 Author Share Posted November 23, 2008 thanks guys for the tips. i will put some artificial light on the hall way and i will indeed increase the GI. there is just one problem in this work. i would like to minimize the noise, i used lancos filter on this and noise threshold in .005 already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peter M. Gruhn Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Seems to me that the exterior is too high. It's hard to be sure what the terrain does, but it looks flat and it looks like I shouldn't be able to see the base of those trees from where I am. The horizon (somewhere there hidden by the trees ;-) should be at ground level. I'm not the man for this, but... if you are using a real daylight system, are you using a sky portal just outside the window? Would using an area light and a narrow focused direct light help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mervin_lim23 Posted December 5, 2008 Author Share Posted December 5, 2008 yes i did use acad for the line work:) i still need to focus on minimizing the noise. that my current problem for now when i render. i really cant perfect the rendering. i always encounter noise in my rendering:) i hope one day i can perfect my settings guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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