Dave Oliver Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 If you've got old people cluttering up your home. Why not send them to Musty Pines? We'll help bring back dignity and we promise it'll be the best three months of their lives. They'll enjoy bingo, complaining, mumbling incoherently, skinny-dipping and organ donation. And once a month it's our famous lucky dip medication switching night. Musty Pines is located at a luxurious location overlooking Vice City's state of the art sanitation facilities. You can still visit your old people, but now you have the comfort of knowing you don't have to. After they pass on to something better, guaranteed in three months or less, you can start enjoying their money. Finally, you can have quality family time again. Musty Pines, now you don't have to say goodbye. Drive through service also available. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Horrible and funny at the same time, quite a talent. Dont think much of the renderings though. Dont give up your comedy career. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Oliver Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 for lack of a better description i took that excerpt from a radio commercial that plays in grand theft auto 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Its funny. On a more rendering specific front, maybe I should offer some slightly more useful advice... I think you have the basics in place, the lighting is nice and the planting is coming along. But a couple of changes could really help this image. The road looks like a grey band, like the image got chopped off before it finished loading. The building looks like a big lump ooking right at you. You could fix both these issues by moving the camera to view the building from more of an angle. This may give you an opportunity to introduce some foreground as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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archytextural Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 I think everything is there for a good image except a nice building. I hope you didn't design it, but wow the proportions and materiality of the building are miserable. Cash this one in and move on to nicer buildings with a better visual focus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Oliver Posted December 4, 2008 Author Share Posted December 4, 2008 no way i got it with the design finished. id love to its finding the work i have trouble with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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