neil poppleton Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 WIP Visual for comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BillyElNino Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 Just a minor issue, you have perspective issues with your photoshop elements because your camera is not at eye level. The scene might benefit from an eye level camera anyway. One other (quite pedantic) thing I noticed is that your shadows are crossing your foreground columns when they should be behind them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted December 2, 2008 Author Share Posted December 2, 2008 shadows crossing....such a basic error, comments appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattclinch Posted December 2, 2008 Share Posted December 2, 2008 a few of the things that jumped out for me - - cloned trees and bushes in the foreground - cloned car groups (blue red orange) are not only cloned, but visually very strong and draw the eye too much IMO. - no contact shadows of the pilots - shadows appear stronger/harder than the sky suggests - there is no impression of strong sunlight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted December 3, 2008 Author Share Posted December 3, 2008 Cheers Matt. I posted this visual because I have looked at it far too long. The architect has changed the scheme again and again and then tweaked it again and again. This unfortunately drains the spirit of the scheme for me....but sadly not uncommon, for projects changing all the time.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 agree with comments above. you definitely need to change the camera height, then all the rest can be done in photoshop. But, you must pay attention to your photoshopping. It's of utmost importance. it's whats making the image fail as it stands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted December 3, 2008 Author Share Posted December 3, 2008 Another angle of the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadmunkey Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 Hi Neil, I like your second image alot better than the first. Can I ask you where you got hold of the 2D entourage that you are using within photoshop? I'm currently looking for a good selection and the ones you have used seem pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted December 3, 2008 Author Share Posted December 3, 2008 Glenn, Photoshop tress form Image Cels, not sure if they still exist we purchased the original set some years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadmunkey Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 Glenn, Photoshop tress form Image Cels, not sure if they still exist we purchased the original set some years ago. Thanks Neil, and yes they do http://www.imagecels.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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