innerdream Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 Any CC welcome. Still need to render with the glass in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amer abidi Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 still too early to comment i fugure, but if anything, i'd remove those green wobbly plots on the table tops.. too distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert taylor Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 love the sofa!!! Good work in progress:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted December 19, 2008 Author Share Posted December 19, 2008 love the sofa!!! Good work in progress:) Thanks guy. The sofa is from e-interiors.net - can't remember the name? I took the wobblies out. I need to get more accessories but I don't have the cash right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted December 19, 2008 Author Share Posted December 19, 2008 A little update. I will add variety to the flowers in PS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 Looks much much better, sharper overall and a bit more contrast sure came in handy here. Perphaps you could put a backdrop image outside the windows, you could still maintaint the overexposed sky/outside, just pop an image and make it barely visible, perphaps use some layer blending in PS and pick the one that only hints that something is out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted December 20, 2008 Author Share Posted December 20, 2008 Looks much much better, sharper overall and a bit more contrast sure came in handy here. Perphaps you could put a backdrop image outside the windows, you could still maintaint the overexposed sky/outside, just pop an image and make it barely visible, perphaps use some layer blending in PS and pick the one that only hints that something is out there. Okay thanks! Doing that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sutcac Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 Are the flowers PS to begin with? Might as well just get a decent model for that, rotate and resize for variety. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted December 29, 2008 Author Share Posted December 29, 2008 Are the flowers PS to begin with? Might as well just get a decent model for that, rotate and resize for variety. Cash poor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenderSketch.com Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 I thought the "wobblies" were nice. I liked how their color matched the color of the table seating. I suggest though to remove the flowers on the tables, they appear to be "clones" and attract too much attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parker2740 Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 I think the geometry tiling is the biggest issue right now. Maybe putting on of the chairs slightly askew and rotating and scaling some of the flowers as mentioned. You might want a slight bleed of light on the ceiling to indicate a light bounce from the ground plane outside. Also, IMO, the tile spacing seems a little big and makes the tiles look like chicklets. Looks good tough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted December 29, 2008 Author Share Posted December 29, 2008 I thought the "wobblies" were nice. I liked how their color matched the color of the table seating. I suggest though to remove the flowers on the tables, they appear to be "clones" and attract too much attention. Thanks for the replies everyone. Yah, the flowers suck. I put this one on hold for a bit. Here is the last pass: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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