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Looks much much better, sharper overall and a bit more contrast sure came in handy here. Perphaps you could put a backdrop image outside the windows, you could still maintaint the overexposed sky/outside, just pop an image and make it barely visible, perphaps use some layer blending in PS and pick the one that only hints that something is out there.

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Looks much much better, sharper overall and a bit more contrast sure came in handy here. Perphaps you could put a backdrop image outside the windows, you could still maintaint the overexposed sky/outside, just pop an image and make it barely visible, perphaps use some layer blending in PS and pick the one that only hints that something is out there.

 

Okay thanks! Doing that now.

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I think the geometry tiling is the biggest issue right now. Maybe putting on of the chairs slightly askew and rotating and scaling some of the flowers as mentioned. You might want a slight bleed of light on the ceiling to indicate a light bounce from the ground plane outside. Also, IMO, the tile spacing seems a little big and makes the tiles look like chicklets. Looks good tough

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I thought the "wobblies" were nice. I liked how their color matched the color of the table seating. I suggest though to remove the flowers on the tables, they appear to be "clones" and attract too much attention.

 

Thanks for the replies everyone. Yah, the flowers suck. I put this one on hold for a bit.

 

Here is the last pass:

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