Circular Spa/Bedroom

[danb4026]

I mistakenly posted a previous render of this room on "finished work" prior to it being finished. It is still a work in progress.

 

I am not sure where else to go with this image to make it more interesting.

 

Any advice, criticisms welcome.

[bearsign]

Hi,

 

at first I must say that it seems finished even this way

 

On the other hand -just for advice of course- I can say that maybe changing the cam position (may some up and/or just some right/left) can give a different feeling. I can't really figure it in my mind, but worth trying.

 

I think sun light would be dominant, inner lighting would be ressesive and a little contrast would give some expression to scene. Again changing the sun position and letting it to fall on the bed would give a better feeling. Maybe a night version can be added too.

 

As I said, just ideas... Nice architectural design & visualisation.

[danb4026]

Thanks for your comments. I will play with the sunlight and dim the interior lighting to see what it achieves.

[danb4026]

Here are a couple of updates. In the first I tried to make the room feel as if the sun was the major light source. The other image has a warmer feel, but not necessarily correct.

 

C&C?

[bearsign]

First one is my choice

 

The second one has no problem except for the background doesn't fit the lighting maybe with a darker background...

 

Nice updates, congratulations

[neil poppleton]

2nd one for me. I think the bricks are mapped too small. Maybe get the brick joints more displaced or bump map and get the spot lights picking up the joint detail

[Horhe]

Thats one wonky window

Id go for the first one, the much brighter one, seems more cosy and inviting. The lattice on the window could be a bit thicker, right now it seems extra thin, one shove and itll fall apart.