Shane Gee Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Any suggestions in improving the attached image? I feel it is lacking something. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 i love it, apart from the people, but don't touch it anymore and move it to the finished work sectionm sorry for the comment on the people, i just prefer stylised people such as silhouettes with a bit of transparency, but its a personal preference. So i think you should leave it as it is and then email me to tell me how it was done, this is the last thing to add to my arsenal, its the one thing i have never been able to do or find the relevant info for, and that image is just how i want my finished camera matches to look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 oh i spotted what it is lacking drivers, unless it is set in the future and they have invented self-driving cars or even more iventive, pimp out the cars and balck out the windows however i agree this would not be suitable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arnold Sher Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Hi Shane, that is one fantastic image and i would not change a thing... It is soft and sexy... I think it is mature in style and feel... I hope you don't mind but i tweaked it in a style of our studio to add a bit more punch. I was keen more to see what it would look like rather than to improve as i think one needs to know when the image is done and move away from it... Anyway, that is my version... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Looks good, Arnold has done some good post work on it, looks better. A bit too saturated in the end IMO. The BMW (or is that a Mercededs?) is too small when comparing to the people around, especially the couple, unless they are both basketball players I would add some reflections on one of the glass walls, perphaps some tall buildings, unless the client is picky and will actually tell you that there are no tall building in the surroundings to be reflecred (but then again maybe they are?). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 right, arnold, i see your work every week and i have seen the tutorial you gave us on your workflow, but i just can't do it what have you done to the image???? i love both renditions of it, i don't favour either of them. they both have there own unique style equally as good as each other. i would just love to be able to edit my images in post and know what it is i am doing, what type of things are changed in post and also how to do that. how do you know what to change in post??? what are you hoping for from the final image after the post production that wasn't in the original render??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Gee Posted January 13, 2009 Author Share Posted January 13, 2009 (edited) Thanks for the responses some really good comments. Unfortunately this is for a planning submission. So the image has to be neutral, not too jazzy. And also there is no reflection opposite-- low builds. However I like the post effect and I think for my own portfolio I will add the extra reflections once the project is finished. Also thanks for the notes on the scale and people- I missed those basket ball players. I love those 3d Axyz cars -- best I have used-- I think they really give a good result. Edited January 13, 2009 by GEES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 hey shane fantastic image to start with and then a pretty cool interpretation by arnold are you saying that all the scenery is 3D? (3d axys cars?) how did you get the people into the scene if not from photoshop? well done once again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Gee Posted January 14, 2009 Author Share Posted January 14, 2009 Hi Stan, No this is a photomontage, but I added cars as there were none in the photo. Rendered the AXYZ cars and very happy with the result I think they blended well into the scene. Shane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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