innerdream Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 Still needs more entourage and a few details here and there. CC welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 21, 2009 Author Share Posted January 21, 2009 (edited) A few more details added. Edited January 21, 2009 by innerdream Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Looks pretty good. Not sure I like the big purple bit at the bottom though. What is it? Maybe try a different framing too, it seems you could use the linear forms of the ceiling to create quite a dramatic perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Im not sure if the streched out AD of the car at the back works, best to either get an image that matches the plane dimensions, or change the plane to match the image aspect ratio. It will make the shot more natural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mi75 Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 I agree with the above comments plus I'd also like to add that I find the guy in the forground who kind of looks like a ghost a bit distracting, sort of like he doesn’t belong. Otherwise it looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 22, 2009 Author Share Posted January 22, 2009 Cool thanks everyone. The big purple bit is carpet in a convention hall, this space is based on a photo reference. I'll work on those things and see if I can't get the purple to look more like carpet. Cheers and thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Oliver Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 the ceiling lights appear to be floating, rather than hanging. and if the cars were at an angle rather than being lined up in tandem they might look a little cooler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 They are floating! It was supposed to look a little conceptual not photo real. As for the cars I'm just going off the reference photo. Thanks for the reply and tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyluc Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 I think the people all look a little weird in the second shot. the "ghost guys" have no feet and this looks less convincing than you would have normal guys with cutt-of feet. the woman seems to big to me. Maybe play some more with the people. The reflection of the cars, especially new ones, would be more I think. And there has to more reflection in the windows of the car. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 Thanks for the reply's everyone! I'm going to have to come back and pick up on the comments a little later. Right now I need to make some money. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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