linus karlsson Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Hallo! http://www.linuskarlsson.se/render_post2.jpg http://www.linuskarlsson.se/render6_post3.jpg 3dsmax, mental ray c&c plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parker2740 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Nice start. I think a real background will help take these images farther. The ambient colors will help add variety as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladin Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Nice and clean! but I think the images will benefit a bit of darkness...the shadows are a bit too sharp and at the same time they are too weak/transparent/bleached. I would blur them slightly and darken them up. I am sure in Sweden the wintry sun produces shadows as delicate as these but they sohuld not be as sharp as they are in your images... A stronger ambient occlusion,maybe? The other thing that I find disturbing is the thickness of the wooden parts...it looks to me as if it is only 1.5 times thinker than the glass on the table? Even if its holds the load of the seater without breaking (you've put those two legs underneath the sofa, I;ve noticed), I am pretty sure the chair won't hold the bending/twisting moments...give it a bit more realstic thickness! How about some matte blurred reflections on the wooden floor? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jameson101 Posted January 27, 2009 Share Posted January 27, 2009 Hey there, your render looks great, i don't like the camera angle of the first image but it is showing nice details on your models materials. The 2nd render is really great. The models you have done are really good and maybe a little more thickness will help. Great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Buckley Posted January 27, 2009 Share Posted January 27, 2009 nice but if i'm being really picky, i'd work on the glass material a bit more, try looking into the trace depth for reflections and refractions, these should help eliminate any dark fringing you are getting on the edges of your glass (mainly the bottom where it touches the table) jeff patton has a great post about this on his blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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