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[max.m]

hi, i have to finish this image tomorrow and would be thankfull for suggestions. i struggle with the reflections and with the background as i have no infos how it looks like..

Edited January 25, 2009 by max.m

[jameson101]

Hey there, just a couple things I notice.

The trees you have used for the middle of the walkway are all the same, you got to have some difference between them, but you can probly get away with it. The sky is so bright on the left it just turns pure white, maybe try a different sky.

I cant work out what is happening at the far left pf the image behind the building. Is that a large wall with shadows from trees. where are the trees?

 

I hope this helps in some way.

[luckyluc]

Hello,

 

The building looks fine, but at the right side of the building it looks like the building is standing in front of a ravine. You should put some more grass in photoshop to fill the horizon. and then you could some trees or shrubs there also.

 

I agree with jameson that I don't know what is happining at the left of the building. Better fill it with some green stuff.

 

The reflection in the windows is not so bad if you look at it the first time.

 

If it is a building in a city, you can put some blurry buildings in the reflection.

If it has a park in front of it you could use some more trees.

 

Overall it is good.

[max.m]

thanks for your suggestions, tried to incude them in this image.

still thankfull for c+c

[luckyluc]

Looks much better. The cut out is nice. The windows are now reflecting something, and the buildings instead of the white blocks are also very good.

[Nate]

Much better.