Exterior Condo

[NOOXY]

Hey guys

 

hope all is well in here. I've been working on this for 2 days and need some c&c. Rendered in C4D R11 and post effects in photoshop..still a wip for client but just need uall feedback:)

[neil poppleton]

Looks interesting.

 

The foreground plant is way too sharp and crisp.

 

Maybe more sky will help the overall feel. The roof clashing with the top of the shot is uncomfortable.

[frank1331]

Modeling looks good. I would direty up the materials a little bit, so it doesn't look so clean and new.

[NOOXY]

thanks guys for the replys...I'll keep uall updated.

[skala67]

Hey Nooxy,

 

always good to see my fellow C4Ders posting. Are you using VrayforC4D for this one? As a WIP it is looking good. look forward to the finished result.

 

cheers,

[skala67]

oh, and one thing. The PS trees in the background, i would lighten them up and give them some blur. They are too dark and crisp and are fighting with the building itself.

[Evanusa]

Hey,

this is my first posting, glad to have found this site.

I am an "old school" achitect/artist that is coming into the mixed-media age.

Anyway, if I may first say, that your work is really very striking in it's "realism", pretty awesome technique. Not much I can say about that, except that I agree with the previous comments.

 

There are some basic "compositional" elements that you should address before you start rendering, though.

 

Take a minute to see if there is a "story" that you can tell by the view that you choose. Or that captures a special moment of time of day, or light quality, or storyline, even location on the page.

 

Given your ability, that will make a diffence between a "competent" rendeing, and a truly unforgettable rendeing.

 

(PS try not to put the front facade in full shadow...unless it is pertinent to the effect you are trying for!)

Hope I don't sound too preachy.

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