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Looks pretty good-

 

- I think the image in general could use a little more contrast.

 

- Different colors on the cars would help add interest, as well as on the building. If the design is finished it's understandable, but the mass on the far left it begging for color, maybe the back wall of the show room too.

 

- What's lighting that mass on the far left? It seems really evenly lit, and kind of green. I'd expect it to be more blue if it's lit by the sky.

 

- The building might look more inviting if the lighting was a little more colorfull, as is it's a little too white/cheap looking...like a Walmart with all the flourescents on.

 

- The cars look really good...

 

- How about adding some people? That would really help bring the image to life.

 

- The ceiling is a little boring...a layin texture would help if that's whats going in there, or joints if it's gyp board.

 

- A higher res sky would make it better, maybe something with clouds/more interest, but not over the top.

 

- The plants look blown out/yellow.

 

That's a lot to change....but I think you'd go from a good rendering to a great one...

 

Chuck

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