innerdream Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 I need to render larger to get rid of the jaggies. Any CC welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badmonur Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 My only gripe is that its kinda small for a conference room. and the focus is on the table rather than the room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted February 15, 2009 Author Share Posted February 15, 2009 We have larger rooms but you have to reserve them! LOL Fair enough CC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frank1331 Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 Something about the lighting is off. The legs of the table are too bright and should be more in shadow if they are blow the table. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaneis Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 (edited) Although the image is quite blurred and your palette is a little over saturated, I think you're closer to a finished piece here than a WIP. As it stands, the impact of the tulips is lost amongst the hues in the window and those cast from your light. Less is often more with colour. A little extra specular to the wall panels might also help. Try playing with the lightin too - a good half of this image is in shadow, so really work on where your shadows are cast (and soften them too). I did a couple of versions in post, hope you don't mind. The following attached to illustrate... Edited February 15, 2009 by shaneis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted February 15, 2009 Author Share Posted February 15, 2009 Hey thanks everyone. I like some of the post you did Shaneis! What exactly did you do? It's a little grainy for my tastes but the other things you addressed make sense. I'll play with it some more. Oh by the way, there are only two lights - a sun coming in the window and a point in the ceiling. I'l soften the shadows... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted February 15, 2009 Author Share Posted February 15, 2009 Round 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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