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it's just soooooo uber clean and clinical. it needs 'weathering' up, even if that means a touch of splotchiness on it. also, making the lighing a bit darker and more contrast will help. look into dirt or AO mapping too maybe.

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Nice render, agree it needs more 'dirt'. You guys not heard of pavements? ;) (sidewalks to our overseas cousins..)

 

pavement is ok here in renderings, but whenever I put grass in a rendering the Lebanese clients tell me you're not in the US anymore so no grass.

I guess it costs to much to maintain. they have never seen a lawnmower...

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Very nice model indeed. I would consider the sidewalks to break the road off from the building....if clean is what you're going for, then you've achieved that, but if you're going for ultra realistic i would agree with some of these guys and "dirty it up" a bit.

 

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- if it is done for a middle east country you could use some palm type

vegetation here and there

- the shadows need to be stronger in my opinion and i think the scene would work great with a sunset atmosphere of darker sky with a gradient and a warm light comming from the left.

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