Gander0 Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 Something or things bugging me about this, does anyone have any ideas. Many thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonRashid Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 Nice image. I feel the vegetation on the left is too bright feels like it's in the room. Doesn't feel like the actual building is blocking any light. But that's just being picky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 This is what I think would help. The glass looks too reflective, the tree to the left looks out of scale, and the materials inside aren't very rich looking. A slight blurred reflection on the matte wood and less reflection on the tables is what I would shoot for. Also get rid of the camera tilt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erickdt Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 I feel like the shadows on the floor could be softened slightly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 Great comments, many thanks... will take a look a those. innerdream, by tilt to you mean I should raise my camera or correct my verticals? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 Great comments, many thanks... will take a look a those. innerdream, by tilt to you mean I should raise my camera or correct my verticals? I think you should correct the verticals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 Ok, will do, thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thanks for previous responses. I've had a bit of a rethink and would be grateful for feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephen Thomas Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 Definitely a big improvement compositionally. That was the first thing that caught my eye in the first image. There's much more of a focal point in the new view, whereas in the original one it seemed more like just a random corner of the room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted June 22, 2009 Author Share Posted June 22, 2009 Thanks for that Stephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 i also agree the second image feels a lot more natural the cups with steam coming off also add much more realism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephen Thomas Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 Also I'm not sure what software you're using but one other thing I would add is that it would be nice to see some variation in the shadows so that the paper sections do not cast as strong a shadow as the frames of the walls. If it's max/vray you're using then assuming it's a 2-sided material for the paper, I would add some refraction/transparency to your base material. It's progressing well though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted June 22, 2009 Share Posted June 22, 2009 Looking much better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted June 28, 2009 Author Share Posted June 28, 2009 Many thanks for the comments folks, will post again after taking them into consideration when I have time. (Got some proper work to do, which makes a change recently) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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