my first rendering with Revit...

[RAYMOND]

came from a VIZ background

 

but here is my first Revit renderings

 

this is at "medium" level with just sunlight

 

still here and there stuff to do

 

but constructive insults welcome

 

r

[mertens3d]

1) i don't care for flat horizons. can you put some trees/ brush/ hills/ mtns or somesuch to break up that line?

2) can you darken the sky where it's getting burned out?

3) I think if you play with your sun you can get some much better/ more interesting shadoes getting cast on the face of the building.

4) your windows with benifit from some reflection and/or something to reflect

5) Your door frame seems to be at a different height than the windows next to it.

6) Maybe add some door hardware?

7) that radial trellis will make some cool shadows on the wall.

8) The right hand roof on img #9 seems to be very thin

9) Your sky is tiling

 

...good start .

[RAYMOND]

well, getting there

 

I would give Revit rendering UI a C+

 

a lot of features missing that used in 3dMAX

 

the client is still making changes on this and it is in just a proposal state so will upgrade as we go along

 

the sky is on a circle extrusion around the building

looks punchy i know

 

comments are deserving so will accomadate

 

r

Edited July 31, 2009 by RAYMOND
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[thomasj]

wouldnt it be best to render this somewhere else? mr in 3ds max...or vray?

[RAYMOND]

believe me, I would certainly want to do that..

just don't have those programs right now

hopefully real soon.

 

 

ray

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