jinsley Posted July 31, 2009 Share Posted July 31, 2009 my progress after a days work. simple, clean design for a local society, still have to add some foliage and more props to the table but thought I would try and get some feedback... thinking of getting rid of the people... and just noticed by looking at the hardcopy on my desk that the uv mapping on the glu-lam beams seems to be a tad off... thx! -JI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 (edited) The walls are overexposed on the far left and right and those people ruin the image. Perphaps some sitting/praying pillows/mats could be better, just to highlight and outline the sitting/praying area (unless the client says no). Are you settling for the symmetry in the shot? Maybe tilt the camera to the side a bit, might be more of an interesting shot. One can tell that the black stone material is tiling 5 times, and there is a seam just in the middle, looks like a worn out part and it hightlight symmetry at the most. Im not sure but it looks like the bases of those wooden beams arent touching ground, but it may be due to the white material at the base being the cause. There is also an issue of slight noise around the skylight. Other than that good start. Edited August 1, 2009 by Horhe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dogragurjeet Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 i am not learned enough to comment on the rendering quality but i love the design. The scene gives out an aura of greatness, of humility that should be there in a temple. Keep it going, i love the way it is shaping up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadmunkey Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 Horhe's got a great eye for detail and has mentioned most of the crits I had (altho I never noticed the columns not touching the floor!), but personally I like the angle of this shot its great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted August 4, 2009 Author Share Posted August 4, 2009 The walls are overexposed on the far left and right and those people ruin the image. Perphaps some sitting/praying pillows/mats could be better, just to highlight and outline the sitting/praying area (unless the client says no). Are you settling for the symmetry in the shot? Maybe tilt the camera to the side a bit, might be more of an interesting shot. One can tell that the black stone material is tiling 5 times, and there is a seam just in the middle, looks like a worn out part and it hightlight symmetry at the most. Im not sure but it looks like the bases of those wooden beams arent touching ground, but it may be due to the white material at the base being the cause. There is also an issue of slight noise around the skylight. Other than that good start. Great in depth crit Jakub, I couldn't have asked for more... and for the positive comments Gurjeet and Glynn! thx for confirming my suspicions on the people, prayer pillows sounds great, but I don't know what the architect will say. T here will be 3 shots as specified by the architect, one of them is straight on to the buddha, other 2 I will post today. The dark material is supposed to be Teak... having a hard time of finding a good image map to use for it... might have to come up with something in photoshop... Lastly... the knife plate for the glue lams on the sides are hidden in the drywall, only the middle 2 beams are exposed on the bottom. Working on an update now... don't have much more budget for this so will try and cover as much as possible. -JI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted August 7, 2009 Author Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thx again guys, got pulled away to another project for a few days... but here are the finals. Still would like to spend a little time adding some foliage and greenery to the alter, but this is what the client wanted. Nice and clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dogragurjeet Posted August 8, 2009 Share Posted August 8, 2009 beautiful renders james. It really brings out the quality of the space, and i simply love the bronze material of the statue. Just that can't get a fix on the scale of things here, but that does not count as a crit at all .... great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 (edited) Great in depth crit Jakub, I couldn't have asked for more...Sure James, no problemo. The updates are looking better, altough the second image looks a bit too dark overall, you could try and increase the exposure a bit. The prayer rugs in the second shot look better than the pillows in the third shot. Looks definetaly better w/o the stylized people cutouts. The light streaks from the skylight in the second image are a bit too small in scale, they look like they would be comming from a smaller area IMO (looks like a flare from knoll, if so then simply increase the scale). The first and third image are best mailny due to the brighter interior and more subtle light handling and POV, the second shot seems a bit too far from the praying area, and seems a bit empty I think. Edited August 16, 2009 by Horhe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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