exterior scene - hostel for rural india

[dogragurjeet]

still working on this project as it is a huge campus. Came up with this shot facing out from the canteen and looking at the small sitout court with pergolas and the main boys hostel building.

Would like to hear from you guys about the lighting and overall feel.

C&C most welcome and will go a long way to help me improve this LIVE project.

Thanking you in advance,

[luckyluc]

I like this Viewpoint, and the lighting also.

 

Can't judge the textures yet because I think you are still working on that.

[kippu]

the composition for starters feels very forced ,i would take it back a little and so that i can see the edge of the water, lighting is good but you have to work on glass and the water

[dogragurjeet]

the composition for starters feels very forced ,i would take it back a little and so that i can see the edge of the water, lighting is good but you have to work on glass and the water

 

 

Thank you for your comments........ i am having problems with glass and water since ages Kippu, as you rightly pointed out. How can i improve it. Have tried some tutorials too but... you can see the best i can do .

[MrCAD]

what prem suggested is right..apart from that you need to work a bit more on GI..the render looks too flat...need softer shadows on where the walls meet on the ground I guess.

 

meher