WeeHouse - Max 2009 w/ MR

[mrucereto]

This is a project I have been working on in my spare time. I welcome any comments or suggestions you may have.

[alejandroserranomonforte]

wow

really good man

i dont use mental ray now but i can tell you can improve it maybe moving the camera. I think would look even better.

 

alejandro serrano

[geo]

Love the design.

[Dave Oliver]

looks good. like a house. do you have an overall design or something that is behind the reason for that image?

[mrucereto]

The design of the house is definitely the greatest strength of the image. Unfortunately I cannot take credit for the design. The weeHouse is from Alchemy Architects prefab house designs. This particular weeHouse is from Minnesota, and is called the Oeschger weeHouse.

 

Thanks everyone for your comments thus far.

[mrucereto]

I have an update to my side project. I have done a significant amount of changes and added a few more details. I'd like to know your thoughts.

[Dave Buckley]

looks good, however a few things i've picked up on

 

• bush behind wall needs a bit of work, it looks like it's been cutout and stuck on (i know that's what has been done, but it's not meant to look like that )
  
• the bricks on the wall feel rather large.
  
• the camera angle is a little bit strange, try bringing the camera up a little bit, this will also reduce the amount of perspective distortion that you are getting (or just add a camera correction modifier)
  

thats all i can think of for now but good work keep it up

[Gary Ledgerwood]

Very nice render. I do agree with the brick size. There also appears to be some weird horizontal projection in the middle of the brick wall. Not sure what that is. And the asphalt texture looks strange to me.

 

Aside from that, the house itself looks amazing. Nicely done.

[rygoody]

I think the brickes are little too shiny. I would also use some trees and bushes that look more realistic.

 

But other than that it is nice render.