First post - school project with showroom

[mouarffff]

Hi everybody,

This is my first post so I'm gonna explain a bit who I am...

I do a vocational training in an architect agency as a computer graphist.

It's been nearly a year I'm doing it and I still have lots of problem.

I'd like to insert my 3d draw in a picture for this project. But it really doesn't work and I don't know what to do to correct it.

So if anyone can tell me everything about how to do that kind of thing I'd be pleased and recognizing...

Thx

Ps : I work with 3dsmax 2009 with vray

[BillyElNino]

The first thing you need to do is open PhotoShop and give that poor Renault back its back wheel, bumper and roof.

 

You need to dirty up your grey floor texture around the building. Its too flat.

[Stan Zaslavsky]

and i think there is far too much foreground - i imagine your focus should be on the new building rather than all that road. or at least you can add DOF to blur our the front.

[mouarffff]

Hello,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I tried to correct my images.

This is what I get.

C & C are welcome

[wasteland giant]

1. remove all nasty 3D people. photoshop people in.

 

2. remove car from foreground... or add another so its not so central to the last image.

 

3. lose the streetlight + make image darker and punch up the building (ought to be the focus). make the building interiors brighter at night.add some red motion lines for car moving. remove car. No car is that colour at night. Go to flickr. Use phrases like car night/lights/motion and find something you can use....

 

4. I'd find better skies and make the images a bit punchier (that said I like colour in my renders).

 

5. remove the lamppost that looks like its sticking into the building in the 3rd image.

 

 

 

very much improved by the way. A bit more work and you're getting there.

[mouarffff]

Ok,

Thank you for your advises. I don't understand what you mean by "make the image a bit punchier"? Could you be more precise ?

 

I have a lot of work to do right now so I'm gonna try to correct the images as fast as possible.

 

Thank you