helenistikyay Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 any cc will be welcomed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tcupp Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 Like it, although I would like to see some more skin on the gal. JK, actually some swimmers in the pool would help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAllusionisst Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 Looks like the deck is made up of 4x16's which isn't practical, but I like the warm soft feel of the render. As stated some entourage or no entourage might work better than one clothed woman? Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raq007 Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 yea deck has little large size.. and grass which is close to the camera should have little displacement.. overall thats really nice wrok.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 I'd also emlinate the foreground leaves. Sharp pointy triangles so close to the camera aren't working in your favor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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