Second VRay Scene

[Alopez603]

This is my Second attempt to a Vray night scene for a Library. please give me any good feedbacks.

[easy3dsource]

This image is off to a good start! My main criticisms would be in your selection of textures; that stone surface of that curved wall doesn't look appropriate for the sort of structure that you've modeled. I would suggest using something more simple that isn't going to read so repetitious. Also; the pillows on the couch are really bold, and tend to detract your eye from the rest of the image. Since your image is not about those pillows; I would choose something more neutral. Overall, I would suggest determining what your "subject" of this shot is, then revise your texture selection (think: "less is more") to meet the goals of your composition. Looking forward to your progress

[Alopez603]

Thanks for the feedback i thought that too, sometimes i just look at it so much i cant tell the difference anymore.

[easy3dsource]

You're welcome. I think one of the best things I did to help with my architectural renderings is flipping through magazines with architectural photography. Find some images that you feel are powerful and analyze them to figure out what makes them so effective. Then assimilate that into your own work... easier said than done, but it's always helped me out; I hope it does the same for you.

[Jonathan Sanchez]

Looking good Alma.. my suggestions: I second the notion that the brick texture on that curved wall doesnt work well... texture on the sofa is very repetitive as well. If you have some time..pherhaps maybe you can add something behind the camera so that the glass reflects the rest of the library.

[Alopez603]

Thanks yeah ill try to put something behind the camera. i never thought about doing that.