neil poppleton Posted February 4, 2010 Share Posted February 4, 2010 Just early test renders, lots of work to do but throwing out for crit, anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted February 5, 2010 Author Share Posted February 5, 2010 5 minutes through lightroom whilst morning coffee... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slinley Posted February 5, 2010 Share Posted February 5, 2010 The updated brickwork looks blurred, and your foliage in the foreground looks too yellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted February 5, 2010 Author Share Posted February 5, 2010 Cheers Slinley, will pick up colour correction at post production stage.. Stonework, probably blurry due to low res wip......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted February 5, 2010 Share Posted February 5, 2010 I think it looks great. The main thing I would criticize it that the materials are too monotone. The drive pavers are too close in color to the brick. The roof is slate? but it is shown lightish and therefore doesn't contrast enough with the brick. Even the conc steps have a pinkish brownish tone. Maybe the landscaping will break this up.....hedges around the base; some accent plants. Cars look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted February 10, 2010 Author Share Posted February 10, 2010 A similar stone individual property, this one more developed at its final stage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted February 10, 2010 Share Posted February 10, 2010 This one looks great. Nice material contrast. The car on the left looks too big for the length of the garage. The balusters of balustrade need to be closer together - looks gappy. But then maybe it would look to heavy.............maybe slimming the bulges a bit. Bushes at right driveway entrance look a little dark; grass looks a little light. There are some white spots in the glass reflections that are a little distracting. Top of tree at right back is maybe too flat. Bushes at front low wall centered? What does Jim Carrey say?........somebody STOP ME:)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cadmunkey Posted February 10, 2010 Share Posted February 10, 2010 Yer I like these, could do with a bit more post process tweaking but it looks good so far. Nice sized houses too, I need me one of those Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now