TSuess Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 This rendering was produced for my own portfolio. I wanted to explore modeling and texturing a more natural environment. thoughts, suggestions, critiques welcome! Thanks, Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonathan Sanchez Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 It looks good Tom, but the camera angle is so distorted that it is difficult to make out some of the detail, partcularly in that little stream you have running in the foreground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TSuess Posted March 5, 2010 Author Share Posted March 5, 2010 Yeah it is distorted to a degree. I wanted to use the Cam correction modifier to create a more dynamic image. I was trying to embellish the simple boxy architecture. I feel commited to it now from a composition standpoint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REDVERTEX Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 camera correction is good idea for such a "box" project. The problem is that the camera lens is too wide. It looks like 10-14mm. Just try with 18-20mm and then apply the CC modifier. Some additional detail will give better feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfured20 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Agreed about the extreme angle.. It makes it hard to give other crits. Your pine tree on the right hand side... is that from Onyx? My partner has been exporting pines for me from that program, and the needles barely show up. I dont have the program myself, so I can't see how to help him with that, but for your rendering I can barely see a little fuzz around the branches. I would play with that program some more, and see if you can get some more substantial needles. Hmmm, is there anything else? With this distortion the vines along the ground in the foreground bother me because they look like tentacles about to get me, but I think that would change with less distortion and no modeling changes. So, yeah, I would love to see how this turns out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TSuess Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 Yeah the pine trees are all Onyx. The poly count on the pine trees can get very high very fast when you increase the number of needles. I'll see what I can do though. I did this as a side project for my portfolio, unfortunately I am overwhelmed with real work. Hopefully I'll have time to get back to this in the near future. thanks for the comments. I do appreciate them! -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manojglobal Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 Hi Tom Really nice lake house. Yesterday i create architecture interior model: http://forums.cgarchitect.com/40058-architectural-interior-model.html#post277749 Any comments are welcome.. Manoj Singh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fpcamp Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 You could try to show the lateral side also to give a better idea of the volume. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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