WIP - Casa Bianna Spain / Hidalgo&Hartmann

[cupsster]

For practice I decided to reproduce this piece of architecture.

For start some reference images what I'm after.

[cupsster]

Displacement goes crazy??? Can anyone explain? What is that black thing on floor? I used default settings for displace with height 3mm.

[cupsster]

Mysteriously it solved itself..

[cupsster]

Living room area. Exterior bit burnedout but it's progress. Main structure is fully modelled, I'm moving to furnish and environment setup. I think I'll go for spring after rain morning mood..

Edited April 13, 2010 by cupsster

[cupsster]

I want this warm color but not so much, maybe I'll try to render with HDRI nex time.

Any C&C on improve or enhance image are welcome.

[abmitalia]

I like the start - but work on the floor bump, it seams to be way to large and soft. The concrete is well done but I wouldn't put it on the upper part of the wall behind the sofa, personally - looking ahead ... RK

[foxlee]

You might need some reference images for the interior as well. Some of the furniture placement looks too forced or the scale too big not sure. Would be good if you could give some image refs. of interior, so intention of space and its relation to exterior becomes clear.

Edited April 14, 2010 by foxlee

[foxlee]

Found some image of interior. So furniture looks right. The Mies chairs in your composition blocks the view too much, too important in that angle. See how furniture is used to guide eye to connect with view and place (context) outside. Composition is very important and you need to ask for crits regarding that I suppose. Camera is also lifted to a degree to make wall and floor lines clear as connection between in and outside is indicated by these linear lements.

[foxlee]

This might be a better angle for the view you have chosen, pulling the camera back , makes less of furniture and connects the angled wall with steeply angling slope of the surrounds. Plus the severe right angled view is used to set up a context for the angled wall.

So highlight the compositional elements of the design in the images to make the image describe the reason for the architecture.

[cupsster]

Thank you foxlee, I think I have all the images avaliable on the internet on the subject cause I done my homework well and I must say that this furniture is moved for shot purposes here and there Scale is right, Barcelona have 75x75x75cm.

For floor mat is only place-holder for now, will be replaced once I acquire more decent texture or I'll make it full 3D.

About camera angles I'm not sure for now, it's not final placement. For image image in post #9 I can tell that at that position is table with chairs in original design. I'll stick with it for now but it's subject of change. It was pretty demanding to get building to scale cause floor plans was in jpeg of poor quality and resolution. And in art of architecture centimetres (or milimetres) are their own measure

 

But in general you're right about view flux.

Edited April 14, 2010 by cupsster
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