videep Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Hello Everyone, This is a bedroom that I am working on. Please do crit/comment. ThankYou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Nice. The window needs more detail to match the overall shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Ledgerwood Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 I wouldn’t want to wake up and put my feet on that floor. Hopefully there is radiant heating. I also agree about the window. Otherwise, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted May 6, 2010 Share Posted May 6, 2010 The window reflection on the floor is distractingly bright. Also I would open the view up more to see the whole bed and more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
videep Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 Hello, sorry for the late reply, had some internet problems. ThankYou Neil, Garry and George for your help. Posting a new render with some changes...I actually saw this kinda shiney marble and the reflection was almost the same so thought to not tweak the reflection much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 personally i dont like the angle of this shot , secondly i dont like the textured second version of it , its too many things happening but if you are going to stick with it , then please scale the wall paper texture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Hi, The floor is too shiny; normally you would have a shiny marble/granite like this in a commercial corporate lobby or a palace. You also need the tile edge grid lines. You would have a base board at the bottom of the right wall. The mullions of the window need to be made 3d and maybe suggest a material. The frame of the picture above the bed is wanting to be heftier. The window reflection on the floor is still too bright I think. All these things are easily fixed. However you got the most important thing right: the quality of light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
videep Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 ThankYou Maria and George for replying... MARIA : Well yea, I am going to scrap the textured version. So I have made some changes to the floor reflection and now I am working on the type of window that needs to go here... GEORGE: For the lighting part, which picture are you talking about the very 1st one or the textured one? I am working on the windows, if you have any reference image, please do let me know. ThankYou for replying.. Attaching a new test render... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 personally i dont like the angle of this shot Quoted for agreement. I think the angle could be successful, but right the composition is really pushing my up and towards the very upper right hand corner of the image. I don't know if it is simply the bright window that is causing my eye to settle on this area of the image, or if the verticals are slightly distorted, pushing my eye into this area. The slight vertical distortion might simply be an optical illusion that is created by the dark's contrasting against the lights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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